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첨삭부탁드립니다. 라이팅 2.5가 나와서요ㅠㅠ 조언도 달아주시면 감사하겠습니다.

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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer

▶ Topic :

The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

▶ Your Answer

 It is debatable that whether or not people can understand contemporary culture by analyzing the trends of its youth. I disagree with the idea that trend of youth represents whole contemporary culture at that time.

  Admittedly, trends of youth reflect contemporary culture so we can understand some aspects of the culture. This is because youth are most sensitive generation for the new trends or a period atmosphere. For example in 1980, in Korea, many youth were participated in demonstration against military ruled government. Moreover protest songs were popular among youth at that time. This trend of youth reflect the situation that nation was under military dictatorship. Therefore by watching this culture of youth related to demonstration in 1980 in Korea, people can comprehend social atmosphere under dictatorship those days. As seen in this epitome, people can understand some sides of culture in those days through youth culture.

  However, trends of youth cannot show all aspects of contemporary culture because many different generations consist of a society. For example, In Korea, young people like and enjoy k-pop culture. Psy who is famous for his song ‘Kangnam style’ is popular among young people. However some old people think that ‘Kangnam style’ cannot show Korean value. Because it does not contain Korean value but only includes noisy sounds and fast rhythms with sexual contents.   

  Moreover, trends of youth so frivolous and changes fast that people cannot catch contemporary culture through it. For example, the brand, ‘Nike’ was popular among young people one time in Korea. Every young people where it. However this trend had continued only one year and trend changed. Therefore people cannot understand whole culture those days by observing short-lasting trend of youth.     

  To sum up, it is not proper to understand contemporary culture by observing youth culture. This is because youth culture cannot represent opinions of whole generations and its frivolity makes people difficult to catch culture of whole society those days. Therefore, people should consider cultures of whole generations to comprehend a society’s culture at that time.

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